Tuesday, 1 July 2014

My Narrative story Black Ops


Black Ops

Planes crashing, nukes  killing everyone, machine guns killing everything in its path, blood everywhere!  Why is this happening?  The only choice was to fight.  Three years ago from today 3rd of May 2020 this war began.

My name is Remus, my friends call me Crazy Kumara Killer.  My friends Levi, John, Titan, Eru and Airym are all apart of the resistance known as the Wolverines.

This is our story….


4th of May 2020

“What is the Japanese military doing?” asked Eru.

“It has something to do with that tiny little box we’ve saw out in the streets. The Japs want to get their hands on it” replied Levi.

“What’s our plan?”  We need a plan.  We need to learn how to fight and how to use these guns!  I don’t know the first thing about dealing with Japanese terrorists. “Who knows how to kill these guys” panics Eru

“Well we need to get that tiny little box before the Japs get their hands on it and it’s a good thing Titan’s here then, huh?. “He’ll know what to do” I replied.

All the attention is focused on Titan, all are hoping and willing he comes up with a plan to rid our land of the Japanese threat.

“First of all,” Titan spoke slowly, “we have to kill at least four or five Japanese and take their uniform that they are wearing.” Titan stared at us to see if anyone would disagree. No one did. “Then we put on their uniform, weapons and explosives.”

“How?” asked Eru.

“I know how,” said John. “We go up to the city gates and we will be checked by the gate sentry. As they come up close, we overpower them and kill them with our blades. No shooting as we don’t want to draw any attention. We will leave now to get those gears”said John. “Lets go.”



Later on that day. There I was standing, waiting for the call from the leader first knew john slit one of the soldiers neck and we followed behind him then we set a bomb off in the city hall where hundreds of soldiers are there.


later on that day about 4 pm
“ohhh no !!! our base is raided why do they do this to us” ask Airym i don't “know but we gonna find out” said titan on the way to finding a new hideout we see that tiny box again we pick it up and kept going when we got to a old mine we started to read the ancient  symbols on it.It look like a code  “write this down” said titan 世丙丽亐卄且丁亙笹笥筍笙靨靧亗怔怍.


5th of may 2020 6 am
working out more plans to drive the japanese out of our city  how are we going to do that said Eru shaking nervously “we make it more bloody that they will refuse to stay.



2 hours later
kaboom a big explosion in the middle of the city it was a blood bath they threw a flash bang at me I was dizzy and i was about to drop like a sack  of potatoes, my friend Eru dragged me to cover while he was doing that he got shot in the spine twice he died that day saving my life.I got up and everyone was cheering and crying.  WOLVERINES,WOLVERINES,WOLVERINES.

9:30pm setting up claymores and c4 around the japanese headquarters ready to bring this building down, yes sir are you ready to kill every
japanese in that building, Yes sir while why are we standing move it move it move it.I can't tell you the whole story but  I can say that we won.we didn't kill all of them. now we sit there listening...,waiting for the next war
you're wondering where the tiny box is? dont worry its in a safe place.

We celebrate our lost that gave his life up for us. We left this for another day till next time…

3 comments:

  1. Hi Remus,
    I enjoyed reading this action packed story. You are using some great language in your writing. I really like the part you said 'Titan stared at us to see if anyone would disagree. No one did.' This shows how radical his idea was, yet everyone was keen. Keep up the good writing.

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  2. Hi Remus,
    I enjoyed reading this action packed story. You are using some great language in your writing. I really like the part you said 'Titan stared at us to see if anyone would disagree. No one did.' This shows how radical his idea was, yet everyone was keen. Keep up the good writing

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  3. Hey Remus
    Nice decriptive language you could have made bigger paragraphs
    Manawanui out!

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